Ice Fishing
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Allier Zelaya:
I love the idea. You might want to have a still pose for the fish when he talks.
Dhar:
I love the character and the original concept. Good work.
Charles Eubanks:
Wow, great performance! His body movement and facial expressions match the energy of the dialog really well. I love the run off-screen at the end, how is head drags behind the rest of his body. One subtlety you could have added is the gasps (frm 71-86, and 116-126). In summary, very good work!
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
You could push some poses for better performance, the jump one for instance is a little poor. Work on the spacing and add some more arcs on some of the moves, your timing looks nice. It's got nice potencial.
Jeroen Koffeman:
Beautifull, aspecially like 'short'. Why not some more exagerration after this word? The voice builds up in seriousness from 'short' to 'thing' , though in your animation 'short' is the most exagerrated word. Still, very convincing
Aaron Clement:
Nice energy, overall! I like the lip sync, too! Great use of shapes in the lip sync... It was refreshing to see a clip that wasn't floaty.
Deanna Bishop:
Funny idea :)
Could use a bit of quick anticipation when he throws the fish. Looks like the fish just flies away. The ending is really good.
David Trudel:
oh! very interesting character!
Beat Bachmann:
Raymans Brother from the Antarktis :-) I like it!
Johnny Castuciano:
this one is fun
Taber Dunipace:
If I didn't know that the fish was going to talk, I don't think I would've caught it. Keep studying the principals.
dinesh:
brilliant cartoony style and fantastic acting to go with it... definitely a cool contender for top spot!









Animator: David Seymour
Description: pose to pose and straight ahead
Experience: None
Time taken: Too much