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Allier Zelaya:
Great animation. One thing I noticed is that the character 's expressions seem aggressive for the dialogue, but well acted.
Andy van Straten:
this is great, love the shaking on the holds
Guillaume Roux:
Great stuff I love it ! Especialy the "thing" pose
Niels Beekes:
I loved the angry shake in his hands! He could wipe the plate of the table a bit faster or harder though.
Tamara van Zal:
GREAT!!!
Louis Ng:
I like the tremble he had at 'insecure' onwards.
My main grouse is his lip sync. Moon isnt particularly suited to lip sync, I think.
Johnny Castuciano:
really awesome, but the teeth were hard to sell with the lip synch
V_I_C_K_Y:
Nice stuff..!
Jeroen Koffeman:
Very nice, I would put the plate swing off the table just a bit earlier though, level with 'CURE'. It would than strengthen this phrase. Just one or two frames earlier would make the difference. just a detail, very nice
Paulo Clayton:
I love the emotion. "F-f-f-fat" is excellent in particular! Love the anguish! Well portrayed and executed.
Ken Rice:
Nice one - I like the guy eating his soup - nice counterpoint to the main action.
Émylie:
awwwwwww cute,, thats good work!
John Vassallo:
Nice work! Would have loved to see a more emotional reaction at the end. The rest is great.
Jason Fugh:
11 stars: great facial expressions and pacing
Aaron Clement:
The lip sync felt off at the beginning. The eyeline seemed off target, too. Not too bad mechanics wise, though.
Tim Lobes:
It doesn't look like the eyes are looking at the other guy.
ArunVijayan:
hey nice acting......
sharad kumar:
hi..animation looks excellent..only thing i would like to add is that you could have hit the up accents with the eyebrows..like when he says 'once',the eyebows can move up and settle back to normal.
Yeray Díaz Díaz:
Nice job, starts pretty good but get a little too tight towards the end, you overuse the s&s on the head also. Too bad Moom's tought on the lipsync to add to the "fat" part. Nice job!
Cameron Huber:
Pretty sweet attempt dude! I found that the shriek at the end was off from the audio clip by a little, and it was hard to tell sometimes if he was talking to us or the other person at the table - when he says "fat" it looked as though he was looking out to audience, maybe just my eyes playing tricks :)
Bader Badruddin:
nice ....lip sync needs some tightening...but overall good effort!
miles southan:
Fantastic work. The mouth shapes dont really match the audio though.
Rob:
Very nice... I like the contrast between the two characters, and the great progression of intensity in the acting of the main character as he builds up to the big explosion...
Aaron Jonas:
good stuff. lips sync needa some work
Taber Dunipace:
Some nice stuff going on here but a few of the actions are hard to read or are not conveyed well, such as the bowl slap. Work on better contrast of timing. Nice stuff.
dinesh:
brilliant!! excellent acting and situational comedy...with great lip sync!
Spencer Jones:
Really cool. Liked both characters. The guy eating soup was wicked and didnt hog the limelight either. I really believed he was eating that soup too. Nice
Stephan Hempel:
Good. I like the sync between body movement and when is what said. Gestures are also good.
Zee Myers:
it's really hard with this dialogue to do poses that don't feel on the one hand underdone and meaningless and on the other, overanimated...but you did it! great scream too









Animator: Daniel Shlaifer
Description: Dinner :-) ...
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 1 week