Look at me!

Final Rating: 5.39. Finished: 22 out of 95 entries.
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Animator: peng jie

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Experience: 5 years

Time taken: 15 days

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Luc Degardin:

Very nice poses. Lipsynch needs some work, and there's a couple of beats you didn't use (fat!; thing)

Jason Smith:

I love it. Great poses!

Nick Adducci:

Man I love this guy's expressions. Excellent work.

It could stand to be rendered, and I have a hard time figuring out his motivation for the last yelp. still great expression, but not being able to see the character probably didn't help.

Ben Hammersley:

i like the end pose. it is original so far, it emphasizes what he has just said. It is a nice strong pose.

would have liked to see a stronger transition on the word "thing". seems a bit too relaxed for how he is saying the word.

Jeroen Koffeman:

nice facial expressions.

John Vassallo:

Not sure the last pose is clear but the rest feels natural. Good work!

Rami Daoud:

nicely done...but i didn't like the last pose soo..

sharad kumar:

hi..pretty good stuff!..i like the timing where he gets up and cushions into the 'middleaged' pose.i think there is room for more eyeblinks and eyebrow up down movements which'll put a lil more life into him....anyway,its a nice piece of animation!

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You've got some nice moves but need to push the performance on the poses, go with the clip and its energy.

Aaron Clement:

Not too bad... could have come up with something more original, though... there are a lot of other entries that did pretty much the same thing... it sometimes helps to think outside the box.

J Saunders:

really good, but who said the line "i made you short?" maby if he looks off camera during the line it will at least make it seem like some one else is in the scean.

Joey Shabadoo:

This is really good, except for the last pose. It doesn't seem to fit and I'm not really sure what it's supposed to be.

Rob:

Nice, but I'm missing some kind of full-body expressing for "THING!"... what you have now seems too muted for the intensity in the voice. The scream at the end needs something different in the arms, we've seen the scooping pose already, this would be a great opportunity for a full explosion feelings with the arms shooting out. Good weight and nice silhouettes for a straight on shot.

Johnny Castuciano:

AWESOME!

andrew s:

I like this. He just pops out of the chair with no anticipation and The walk needs to drive more from the hips, it appears to remains relatively static. But over all I really like it.

Taber Dunipace:

You're a little behind the audio on your syncing and I would've liked to see a second person.

Renn:

The expression at the end is the only aspect that is a major drawback for this animation.

Everything else look to be just fine. Nothing revolutionary, but a great job none the less.

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

good good good..........