Frank Collazo:

good overlap action at the end

Johnny Castuciano:

dece

Aaron Clement:

I like your acting. The hugging of himself was nice. Maybe a stronger ending... apart from that, great!

Yem Xnake Yu:

the movement needs power,and there're a little twining in your poses

Rob:

I like the ideas here, but I'm not feeling the accents around the explosions in the dialogue enough. Leaves the shot with less energy than the voice is putting out. Good weight on the flop over to the table.

Dave:

good facial expression on "look at me"

Aaron Jonas:

nice acting

Taber Dunipace:

Good, but kind of bland. Keep studying the principals.

Stephan Hempel:

I like the overall movement but the performance lacks strong poses. The change between "adorable ones... Now look at me" is certanly difficult to accomplish but needs some kind of preparation or thinking process.The Follow thrrough of hands and arms at the end is nice.

Dave Blanchette:

Nice ending!

Renn:

Another character and a proper set would definitely help this animation. Character animation is still quite unrealistic... maybe a bit more fluidity?

Good work so far.