Luc Degardin:

Love the way you manage your cuts.

Dan:

I really like the changing of perspective...works very well!

Mariya Kalachova:

I love your animation style!! I'd love to see more of this kind of thing on 11second club!

Ian John White:

Funny, like the pencil gag. Animation needs to be alot tidier for my liking, way too much symmetry in the arms and hands, both equally timed in almost each pose. Nice effort

Niels Beekes:

Wow, that freaked me out! Haha. He's everywhere! Then again, that's one of the nice abilities of animation isn't it? The acting needs some improvement though. Maybe that's because he's jumping everywhere

Ritwik Nag:

Great concept nice style.

Cameron Huber:

haha neat idea. I liked it. I can see where you were going with the camera cuts (short, fad, middle-aged) but I only got that after watching it a few times. Maybe instead of cutting the transitions could be smoother? Really neat :)

jinu:

good idea

Charles Eubanks:

I can tell you put a lot of effort into this! Clever staging to emphasize the dialog. Keep working on those drafting skills, and your animation will improve even more!

John Vassallo:

Cool. Nice idea. The cuts are distracting and happen too fast.

jonathan fontaine:

Ilike this one !

jonathan topf:

Nice idea

Craig Perez:

Nice 2d like the raw loose style, Was lost in a few parts due to the fast cuts may want to limit the cuts to 3 or less for such a short clip...awesome job!

Aaron Clement:

Good ending... I found the line work a little distracting.

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice job, original. IMHO there's a lack of hold in the poses, they're barely readable, apart for the missing inbetweens there are some mayor changes that would need some polish.

Pam:

Nice concept and choice of view points.

Beat Bachmann:

Weg da!

Johnny Castuciano:

COOL

Spencer Jones:

i quite liked this one. really liked the crazy cam for the short fat bit. and felt his stress pulling at his hair. nice

Taber Dunipace:

Ok nice exaggeration in places but before doing 2D animation you MUST learn to draw consistantly. I recommend Preston Blair. Also, study animation principals.

dinesh:

LOL awesome!! great pencil work, love the ruff and crude style, works well...
great ideas n choice of camera angles for the short, fat n middle aged scenes haha!!

David Humphreys:

watch your cutting, its hard to keep track of.

good idea overall but really think about your staginig in future

Valere Gauthier:

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Stephan Hempel:

I find it good, that you made use of some typical 2d animation elements like sudden change in skaling or perspective. But I find volume and outline could need some more consisteny. And you could have left out the pencil.

Amy:

Nice idea.

Andrew Linke:

like the pencil coming in, and i like the different style.