Steve Sloan:

great work, the only thing i didn't like was that the horse didn't look like he was walking. only the legs were moving, the rest just stood still

Luc Degardin:

Héhé, cool idea! maybe an up-down movement on the horse root could let you make some poses stronger.

Gill Frank:

nice to see 2d in here. My only thing is that acting. the whole animation is to still all way trough.
I think spending less time makeing it look nice and you more time and the roof animation would make it realy cool.

Joey Shabadoo:

I think better line quality would make it easier to read.

Guillaume Roux:

I love the concept , cool design...
I would like to feel the breath before and after "look at me" ...
nice stuff!

beck veitch:

Great concept - great characters for the dialog - needs work on the lip sync/timing

Rico Lim:

funny

Tim Kings-Lynne:

this is cool

nice natural, understated acting

cool setup

great characters

would love to see this finished!

thanks for letting me see it

Aaron Clement:

I like it how you kept everything simple. The staging was off at the beginning. I wasn't sure who was speaking at the beginning because both characters were moving there mouths. Nice character sketches.

Mariya Kalachova:

Pity that the lip synch is off just a bit, because the drawings are amazing!

Joe:

Awsome,
Nice timing on the characters. I like how you kept the cowboy alive while the horse is giving the dilouge.

jonathan fontaine:

try to polish lipsync....
I like the horse

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

if the horse is walking... there should be up-down. or camera up down
Good job dude...........

David Alvarez:

The lipsync looks a bit off. Anyway good work!

peter wassink:

decent lip syncing job.
Its a pitty that the horse walk doesn't really work. What is missing is a clear up-down movement on the rider (and possibly a sideways rocking motion, though this is a lot of work in 2d)
Interesting how this works, as soon as i stopped looking at the horses moving legs, which are well animated by themselves, i lost the notion the horse is walking.

Traci Plagmann:

Very nice. The characters are great. Some of the words like "short", "fat", and "thing" the horse could hit a little stronger. The lipsync seems a little late in a couple of places too. Great job though!

match:

nice but you need some up and down on the horse since hes walking.

Jeroen Koffeman:

Let the soundfile begin about 2 frames later, should improve the lypsync. Very nice animation. Perhaps the face of the horse should have been shifted to the right as it turns around at frame 140, to improve the 3-demensional feel, but thats just a detail. Really do shift the sound a few frames, and see what comes out. Also sometimes the lyps need a little more frames to work.

Caleb Drewel:

good drawings, but it needs more emotion, more acting.

John Vassallo:

nice!

Jason Fugh:

5 stars: timing needs work, finish in betweening

Eileen Kearney:

This is great! The horse just needs some vertical motion in his body as he walks, to give a sense of weight and motion.

jonathan topf:

somethin about the lip synch not quite right for me, but a nice piece

vinay:

good one

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Pretty nice characters, the animation lacks some posing but its pretty good considering its limited to just the neck. Good job!

Ritwik Nag:

Neat drawings!!Very nice.Could do with a bit more wilder acting though.Specially in "FAT".More shake in the head with a little reaction on the guy on top.Beautiful piece overall............

Bader Badruddin:

nice drawings, but doesnt really read that well. lip sync is a bit off.

sharad kumar:

nice concept...but u could have really designed the horse a lil fat.

Deanna Bishop:

Nice. Would be nice to see a bit of a bounce in the horse's walk and carried through to the fat dude. Lip sync at "THING" seems a bit off.

Jonathan Paquin:

Could be me, but the lipsynch seems off, especially at the end. "Fat " is a bit late but the rest after that is quite out of synch.

miles southan:

Great draftsmanship but the animation is still pretty rough. The beginning's more solid than the second half. You really need to hit "thing." "Fat" is late. It would be great if there was some up and down going on with the horse's front and back halves which would give you a chance to do some overlap on the fat cowboy. Right now all the body stuff is really stiff/minimal. Great face poses.

Pam:

Love the horse's expressions.
His eyes could be a bit more varied, and maybe a bit of up and down in his walk.

Rob:

Nice drawings, but there's no acting in the body that helps the head animation read. Keeping the body ona walk cycle makes the whole thing feel very disconnected. It could be the internet aspect, but the dialogue is out of sync for me so reading the accents is difficult

Johnny Castuciano:

GREAT! but need a bit more OOMPH!

Brendan Fagan:

solid drawing but lacks fluidy

Niels Beekes:

It well drawn that's for sure! But I miss the cowboy going up and down from the horse movement... At first I though the horse was standing still.

Taber Dunipace:

Timing is killing this piece. You obviously can draw and you know your principals, but the timing of the actions is way off and very distracting.

Hope to see more from you as this is definitely promising.

Spencer Jones:

Liked your phonemes alot & his eyebrow expressions, funny. Maybe the horse could have also been struggling a bit more to lift the guy cos he looks kinda big and I was expecting for more movement around the bottom right area - felt kinda stationary and the walk a bit consistent. F157 the guy eating just randomly opens his mouth real wide I didn't understand why. Nice drawings. Good stuff.

Thomas Giles:

great idea, all round awesome!

Joyce Tan:

it's good to give a horse character that makes the scream more believable. But the shot kind of misleading viewers' eyeline.

Agne:

I like it, but the horse does not look fat, the rider is fat, so its kinda mix up

Michel Dani:

love the characters, but the staging is very weak, and the animation is not really reflecting the intensity of the audio.