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Luc Degardin:
Really good 1st part. After "short", poses are a bit weaker. Tha ending take is nicely done
Dan:
Great exagerated emotions, Great job on the doll motions as well!
Mariya Kalachova:
BRILLIANT!!
John Vassallo:
Nice work on the doll! Overall great animation. The "fat" pose seems wrong, too obvious, but good work!
Frank Collazo:
like it
Johnny Castuciano:
good job! I liked the expressions!
Tamara van Zal:
It made me laugh :)
Mattress moving is a nice extra. Seems a bit busy with the arms moving in so many different directions throughout.
Kamal Bhattacharjee:
Good job dude...........
Charles Eubanks:
Wow, this one is really solid! Great job making the doll's limbs dangle realistically.
Tal Hersko:
nice one, the acting in the begining works much better when he holds and pet his doll.
the poses since 'short' start to be akward. also on 'thing' he's going on 2 different poses which is wierd, i would take him only to the second pose (leaning his head on hid hand) which is pretty expresive. the last jump looks grate. also the timing overall works pretty good.
good luck
Jor:
Nice take on the audio clip! The poses are great, especially the "thing" pose.
Michael Cawood:
Some superb work in here. I love the final move back to the top of the bed. There are a couple of points were hands/arms freeze in place I'd have massaged out but otherwise... top stuff!
Ken Rice:
Really like this - some great natural poses - some real feeling in there - keep it up.
David Trudel:
good work, I like the ending!
Jason Fugh:
11 stars: great dynamic and subtle gestures
Brian Nicolucci:
Really nice work. More then just moving things around you can see some real acting. I think a little clearer on the small figure at the end and this would be perfect. Great work!
Dan Dulberger:
I really liked this clip. But the poses for "short" and "fat" ruin it. They are just not natural. Everything else, before and after, are really sweet and natural (though exaggerated).
Harry G:
Very nice timing. Liked this one.
Allier Zelaya:
Love the doll.
Aaron Clement:
Not too bad. I like your style of animating. Felt like everything was moving a little too much... Good acting doesn't necessary mean lots of movement... but good job with the timing and presentation.
Rob:
Really nice... I think just a pushing that pose around the point where the dialogue hit's "THING" is about the only thing I'd change, there's just too much intensity in the line for the contained acting you have there for my tastes.
Excellent work
andrew s:
Nice. Some very good timing, and nice posing, sometimes the poses need a bit more feathering form one pose to the next but it has great energy
Excellent work.
Dave:
the acting is very good throughout. I wish you hadn't gone with the ever so popular "suprised at something talking that shouldn't be" ending. If you listen to the voice it is a scream of anguish not a scream of fear. Great work though
Danny Young:
I love everything about this! Really great!
Taber Dunipace:
A bit weird on the timing and acting choices. Otherwise very nice. Keep studying the principals.
dinesh:
brilliant and stupendous! love this one!!
Amy:
I love your idea for the two characters. The impact would have been better if we had a closer view of the doll. Maybe change camera angle at one point.
Renn:
Awesome! Everything from the jumping into the air to the doll flopping on the bed, everything just worked seemlessly! Well done!









Animator: dan alvarez
Description: This is my first ever 10/11Second club attempt. I started this on Monday and worked evenings all week to get it done on time!
Experience: 5 years
Time taken: 5 days (evenings)