Aaron Clement:

Love the endind. Pretty good overall.

Traci Plagmann:

I like your acting choices!

Taber Dunipace:

A bit over the top. Try to be a little more controlled so that the audience can follow what you're doing. Keep studying the principals.

Frank Collazo:

very good like the eyes motion

Dave Blanchette:

Great overall!

Dan Dulberger:

Really nice. Only two things I didn't like. The siluett of the legs during "i was adorable once, now". His left leg looks broken with the foot at that angle. The other thing is how his right arm lands on the armrest. I'm guessing you just didn't have time to finish that.

Diego Oriani:

Great timing and great poses.

Deanna Bishop:

Great job! Poses are unique and the timing is great. You got it!

Gregory Naud:

Great Acting!!! Animation is awesome, we really feel the weight in all movements. A great piece to study from;)

Ken Rice:

This animation captures the scene nicely - the scream at the end feels natural - well done.

Josef Sy:

posing and timing are awesome! Just one thing the left knee is broken a bit in the firset secnd or 2. Good Job.

Bing Chen:

nice work~

Andy van Straten:

from the forum i knew this was going to come out awesome! gonna take something pretty special to beat this one :)

Mariya Kalachova:

GREAT!! I saw your's in the forums and it is super awesome! Brilliant poses and timing, a lot of feeling as well!

Ben Van Dyken:

Great stuff! Very expressive and really strong poses. Very cool.

Michael Cawood:

Amazing poses and timing. Really bold approach too. I'd love to know how long this took.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Love it.. this is one of the pieces I was really looking forward to from the forum, and it's worth the wait!

Spencer Jones:

Top 5 surely

Rob:

Excellent work! Nice visual phrasing, good snap into and out of the poses, great feeling of weight. I'm curious how a little more anticipation into the push away would read, right now it sort of comes out of nowhere, which is good as a gag, but it might need just a little more lead-in.

Steve Clarke:

Excellent. I liked this one from the early WIP's and glad it maintained the quality to the end result. Well done.

sharad kumar:

excellent job!...this cant be made more better! great stuff!....

Chris de Souza:

GREAT poses! Solid acting. Amazing stuff! I could watch this one a thousand times. I really hope this one wins.

Luc Degardin:

Really nice job!!

Tim Lobes:

Great job. Hard to find something worng, but, its a little obvious when red guy strikes his poses, too dramatic. Also, white guy's eyes at 246, I assume he is trying to keep looking at the TV but it looks really weird. Could be the eyebrows, position of where he is looking, or too much white under his eyes. Amazing job altogether.

David Webster:

Great poses. I love it.

Jomar Ravalo:

Very strong key poses.

Guillaume Roux:

Great stuff, really good acting choice, nice pose...

dan alvarez:

Fantastic animation!
Not much to critique on, very good execution!

Allier Zelaya:

Great job. I love the acting and timing.

James Lane:

great poses...i especially love the jump when he throws the mirror!

David Trudel:

Nice exaggerated poses. I like the reactions of the guy on the couch. good job.

Jason Smith:

Love the dude on the couch. Nice work!

Charles Eubanks:

Incredible! The entire performance is top-notch, both the facial expressions and the body language. I've been trying for two days (literally) to think of any constructive feedback (other than "this is awesome!"), and all I've come up with is this: When the main character screams the word "thing" (frame 222), you have his face buried in his lap. I think you maybe missed an opportunity for a really fun facial expression there. That said, this is definitely my favorite entry. Excellent work!

Tal Hersko:

Great Timing and poses!

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

it'sssssssssssssssss.....awesome!
i can see 3speed timing(not boaring)
nothing to say.....
very very Good job dude...........

Johnny Castuciano:

thats pretty good!

Cameron Huber:

Love it! Some very nice poses and well blended movement in this one! Top stuff :D

Tim Kings-Lynne:

i like

Nick Adducci:

Aw man I love this. so much great expression.

My one thing could be that when he says "short fat middle aged thing" he seems to act like it's a little rehearsed and that he had thought of it before he said it, but then with the same pacing and acting he "reacts" to Robin William's character as if he had planned that too. maybe that's what you wanted but I think it was more intended to be a real reaction rather than a planned one.

but seriously over all Super Awesome work!

Tamara van Zal:

Great work!!! My little critique is when he says "middle-aged" his right hand looks stiff.

Louis Ng:

Wow i really like this one. Alfred's actions are exaggerated, yet believable!

beck veitch:

Nice animation with a good level of finish

jonathan fontaine:

wow great acting !

scpl:

really great!

Guilherme Trog:

Wow, this is really great!

jonathan topf:

Im not in to the end pose of the guy on the right, he is a bit of a rag doll at the end, but other than that, great, the best so far

Renn:

Absolutely fantastic animation skill! I'd be a bit wary of too much exaggeration though, too much expression for this dialog, and it just starts looking silly. The jump is a good example of that.

That's how fantastic this animation is, I'm picking on that tiny obscure detail!

Extra stars for the idle animation of the guy on the right!

Marin Petrov:

One of the animations I liked most. Good poses and thinking. I don`t like the last action where the left character pushes the right...It looks.... too strong.. may be if you make him push him just a little back to feel that he is weak... That what he feels like , right ?
Also I saw nobody animating the breathing at the end of the words.
Here you have made it but it`s not visible enough. You may try to exagerate it a little