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Final Rating: 6.01. Finished: 11 out of 95 entries.
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Animator: James Lane

Description: My first time entering, but I've been checking out these for a while.

Experience: 9 months not including school

Time taken: apprx. 21 hours off and on

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Guillaume Roux:

Nice stuff, nice animation

Mariya Kalachova:

Love the eyes at the end! nice cartoony finish!

Aaron Clement:

Nice... the expressions at the end were great... good job.

jonathan fontaine:

when the reflect start to talk.. the guy go back a bit too fast..I think

Cameron Huber:

Generally this was a really sweet piece. It has a good setup and is executed nicely. I didn't like his gesture when he said "short..." - the fist hitting the dresser didnt seem to have any weight when it connected. I liked the shriek at the end but felt that the cross-eyes were a little offputting. Nice work!

Michael Cawood:

Very good indeed, it could have been perfect though if there weren't quite as many frozen poses or swimming poses. It needed slightly more control in the middle ground.

Matthew Brophy:

this was my original idea and love how you executed it great job.

Allier Zelaya:

Good animation.

Michael Vandenhoven:

Great! Not sure about the eyes at the end, but aside from that I loved it!

Ritwik Nag:

Too Goood maaan!!!2 good

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

Nice! I love the snappy moves, very expressive poses.

There are couple of move and stick parts and the scream could use a little push.

Still, a nice piece, congratulations!

David Webster:

Great poses and timing! I would have liked to see the character jump up on the chair at the end. Something to really sell the surprise of his reflection talking to him. The staging confused me a little. My eyes kept shifting between the character and his reflection. I felt like it distracted me a little from the excellent movement.

Bader Badruddin:

cool facial expression with the scream at the end. and the idea is very clear.

Johnny Castuciano:

Another REally good one!

andrew s:

I like it

Andrew Stovesand:

I like it

Dave:

boy there are a lot of reflections delivering that second line. I would pull the camera in so that we get a better view of the reflections face since it is showing us most of the emmotion

Aaron Jonas:

good stuff

Taber Dunipace:

Last action is WAY too fast. Don't let the dialog determine what happens physically too literally.

Also take more time to plan your scene. Film yourself. Study the principals. Good efffort and I hope to see more from you!

Gregory Naud:

Great animation. I jsut don't like the eyes at the very end.

sharad kumar:

nice work!..but i guess the reflection eyeballs should've been still on the other character till the end!..great concept though!

Spencer Jones:

To F46 was very good. F80ish I thought was bit overdone in the wrist/fingers department. Maybe at F156 you could have left that arm movement out or toned it down to a smaller action cos was to much going on I thought. Same with boths hands at F212. Maybe should have just gone straight into the next action/pose whatever. And the rest I liked alot. Especially the ending arms/hands & poses for guy on right. I'm not sure which guy you intended me to watch but I found myself watching the guy right rather than the reflection all the way through. Think with small changes this would have rocked

Ralph Pacheco:

Nice exaggeration. Funny.

Regis Le Roy:

good idea to work with the mirror

M.Bell:

Nice animation, but same kind of cliché scene with the mirror image of the guy that I've seen over and over while voting on these.

Marin Petrov:

I like the poses and the timing!