Al&Bob

Final Rating: 5.55. Finished: 14 out of 95 entries.
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Animator: Aleksandar Djokic

Description: Al is a human astronaut who has been transformed into an alien during a journey to another planet. There he recognizes that he is not alone...

Experience: 2 years

Time taken: 2 weeks/about 2 hours each day

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Allier Zelaya:

Good animation. Love the slug surprise.

Guillaume Roux:

AAAAAhhhaahahhahhhh!!!!
Realy funny good stuff

Renaud Déchaux:

Animation is very good, but it's too symmetric.

Niels Beekes:

Nice, there's plenty of 2D this month! I like the characters. Anyway, I like the "THING" part. I think the overlap from "insecure" to "middle-aged" good use some more movement maybe.

Tamara van Zal:

Cool animation. Poses are great. Probably could be a bit stronger with the anticipation parts. Keep up the good work :)

beck veitch:

Some lovely subtle posing to the dialog in this! My only criticisim is it is too symmetrical in the posing.

Johnny Castuciano:

Nice

Joe:

Love the 2D. My only critique would be to offset the arms so that thier not doing the same action at the same time
(Twinning).

Charles Eubanks:

You have impressive drafting skills, and you tell a good story. The performance is solid, and matches the dialog well. One piece of advice I have is to watch out for symmetrical poses ("twinning"). Overall, great job! I look forward to seeing more of your work!

Kamal Bhattacharjee:

Good job dude...........

Cameron Huber:

haha nice idea! The only thing I didn't like was the repetition of the character raising his arms higher in the air. It looked ok but I felt it was more suited to the "I was adorable once..." part

Caleb Drewel:

i like the style of it all, but it just needs more energy, more movement

chrisbyk:

really nice. My only crit is that it s a bit static.

John Vassallo:

Nice work!

Jason Fugh:

11 stars: good acting

Sunny Kharbanda:

Nice character, and good timing. There's a bit too much twinning in the poses though.

Matthew Brophy:

i would have liked to of seen this more completed and a little more with the second charater

jonathan topf:

Nice take at the end

Harry G:

too many still frames in the end

Aaron Clement:

Haha... nice... love the ending. The lip sync felt off... but this was entertaining overall... Great job!

sharad kumar:

keep working hard!

Brad Regier:

i love the scared business at the end.
Way too much symmetry throughout most of it though...

Taber Dunipace:

Nice and simple, very nice! There isn't a lot going on here, but that works in your favor to a certain degree. Try to push your animation though into a more polished and specific personal expression. Study the principals.

David Meigh:

Shame the sound was not in sink but very nice animation, great to see the 2D. Keep it alive :-)

Cheers.

Dave Blanchette:

cute

Frank G:

'Short' and 'insecure' gestures were undercooked in my expectations but I really like the smooth timing and character design.

Michel Dani:

i love it, but the acting needs a bit of work.