Al&Bob
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Allier Zelaya:
Good animation. Love the slug surprise.
Guillaume Roux:
AAAAAhhhaahahhahhhh!!!!
Realy funny good stuff
Renaud Déchaux:
Animation is very good, but it's too symmetric.
Niels Beekes:
Nice, there's plenty of 2D this month! I like the characters. Anyway, I like the "THING" part. I think the overlap from "insecure" to "middle-aged" good use some more movement maybe.
Tamara van Zal:
Cool animation. Poses are great. Probably could be a bit stronger with the anticipation parts. Keep up the good work :)
beck veitch:
Some lovely subtle posing to the dialog in this! My only criticisim is it is too symmetrical in the posing.
Johnny Castuciano:
Nice
Joe:
Love the 2D. My only critique would be to offset the arms so that thier not doing the same action at the same time
(Twinning).
Charles Eubanks:
You have impressive drafting skills, and you tell a good story. The performance is solid, and matches the dialog well. One piece of advice I have is to watch out for symmetrical poses ("twinning"). Overall, great job! I look forward to seeing more of your work!
Kamal Bhattacharjee:
Good job dude...........
Cameron Huber:
haha nice idea! The only thing I didn't like was the repetition of the character raising his arms higher in the air. It looked ok but I felt it was more suited to the "I was adorable once..." part
Caleb Drewel:
i like the style of it all, but it just needs more energy, more movement
chrisbyk:
really nice. My only crit is that it s a bit static.
John Vassallo:
Nice work!
Jason Fugh:
11 stars: good acting
Sunny Kharbanda:
Nice character, and good timing. There's a bit too much twinning in the poses though.
Matthew Brophy:
i would have liked to of seen this more completed and a little more with the second charater
jonathan topf:
Nice take at the end
Harry G:
too many still frames in the end
Aaron Clement:
Haha... nice... love the ending. The lip sync felt off... but this was entertaining overall... Great job!
sharad kumar:
keep working hard!
Brad Regier:
i love the scared business at the end.
Way too much symmetry throughout most of it though...
Taber Dunipace:
Nice and simple, very nice! There isn't a lot going on here, but that works in your favor to a certain degree. Try to push your animation though into a more polished and specific personal expression. Study the principals.
David Meigh:
Shame the sound was not in sink but very nice animation, great to see the 2D. Keep it alive :-)
Cheers.
Dave Blanchette:
cute
Frank G:
'Short' and 'insecure' gestures were undercooked in my expectations but I really like the smooth timing and character design.
Michel Dani:
i love it, but the acting needs a bit of work.









Animator: Aleksandar Djokic
Description: Al is a human astronaut who has been transformed into an alien during a journey to another planet. There he recognizes that he is not alone...
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 2 weeks/about 2 hours each day