Joey Shabadoo:

Lip-sync shape on "once", seems off. Otherwise, nice work!

Guillaume Roux:

nice work , maybe needs to push the facial expression...

Jason Smith:

right on!

Ian John White:

I like this, some nice poses, go changes in pace and a great last few frames!

Mariya Kalachova:

Really really good, kind of lost a bit of my vote on the 'fat' action... because up until then it was perfect. But brilliant anyway.

Jeroen Koffeman:

Very nice. Perhaps you could sharpen the movement of his back a little at frames +/- 210. The most strongly bent position of his back should be a little bit earlier.

Christopher Alarcon:

The ending wasn't good because the scream was made out to be a nervous one not an angry going to get you one! The lighting was really good but i wasn't keen with the background.

Also model your own character, it would show originality.

Lineboy

Mike Courtney:

think about where a person's weight goes when raising a leg

Jason Fugh:

11 stars: nice gesture and timing

Sunny Kharbanda:

Some parts work pretty well! But watch your balance around frame 222. Also check the lipsync in the beginning.

jonathan topf:

I think 'fat' was a bit to big

Dan Dulberger:

Why does he begin counting on his fingers at all if he has no intention to even count to two? Just seems like a very odd thing to do. Animation was fine.

Aaron Clement:

Haha... love the ending...

miles southan:

Great acting, poses and timing! The lip synch on the first sentence seems off and the fingers are stiff throughout. He looks off balance when he lifts his leg at 217. The hips could use more rotation throughout. Really awesome work!

Johnny Castuciano:

good!

Rob:

Really nice work... I like everything except the stamp at the end of "Thing!"... it feels a little clumsy and off-balance... he also feels like he dips a bit too low in the fram to read what's going on in his body there... Other than that, a fine bit of acting..I especially like the touch of beginning to count on his fingers then just going with the frustration.

andrew s:

this is very good, just needs a little bit more defining of his poses

Taber Dunipace:

Very nice, but no second person?

Tamara van Zal:

This is GREAT!

Spencer Jones:

the action from F126 although good seemed a bit contrast-y in character and bit drunk. I think you should have had him hit the second finger cos why would he start making a visual list with his fingers if he was only going to do one. F185 where his anger is building up seemed wrong. Maybe could have had his hands gathering it up first while he was still down low and had him burst quicker at the end. The end where he attacks the person behind cam was funny but a bit extreme I thought. I could be completly wrong though. Good job. (nice use of backplate too)