Ian John White:

Not enough secondary movement, all is on the mouth movements and a few equally space movements into other solid poses.

Ben Hammersley:

Nice Try, would like to see stronger poses.More dynamic then just what the audio suggests.

Sunny Kharbanda:

Really good effort. But some more curves and arcs, especially in the spine, coupled with some more weight in the poses, would make this feel much more natural.

Aaron Clement:

Not too bad. Felt like he was coming to attention a lot of the time, though. Good exaggeration.

Yem Xnake Yu:

it's good ,but needs polish,

Craig Perez:

Nice 2d great job on the breathing around FR102...

Yeray Díaz Díaz:

You need to push your poses, add some curvature to the line of action.

Johnny Castuciano:

on a tablet?

Taber Dunipace:

Not too bad but for 2D animation, you badly need to learn to draw before being able to control the drawings well enough to animate them.

Study the principals.

Spencer Jones:

Wasn't understanding the pose expressed at F189. Maybe could have been a better decision than to have him stand back to face camera completely straight for F228. I didn't feel that was convincing or true to the audio. my interpretation was that he was kinda not arsed about anything by that stage and would not have made such an effort to turn back around, let alone be looked at straight on. Other than that was going good. I'm sure 2D must be more work that 3D so well done