Allier Zelaya:

Hands seem a little stiff.

Frank Collazo:

to much motion

Ian John White:

Some nice fluidity in the mvements and some great poses, little tweaks needed here and there, and the right hand on him seems to be a tad over active imo. Nice so far though

Brent Steinberg:

there are a lot of unnatural acting decisions you've made, that are kinda distracting. im not sure what that pose on short is supposed to be telling me. the beginning was strong when he was in the chair, and presenting himself, but then the posing got a bit ackward

Daniel MC Alvite:

it feels a bit uncomfortable the pelvis around fr 190, but you have a good timing specially on "thing" nice hit.

Jeroen Koffeman:

Very must alive! I really like the feminent expressions of the hands. Great, don't know what could be improved.

Charles Eubanks:

This is really good! I like the follow-through on the arm movements, how you showed the looseness of the arms with secondary motion. I think you could have given a little more punch by adding some stronger bounces on the big lines. But overall, great job!

Sunny Kharbanda:

I like the start a lot. After that, the poses get a bit awkward, especially with the hands. Also the literal poses for "short" and "fat" were quite a letdown after the subtle acting in the first line.

Tamara van Zal:

I like this animation. The weight of the character's body seemed very believable to me. I think getting out of the chair needs to bit simpler, seemed he leant back and forward one too many times.

Aaron Clement:

Hehe... I thought he was sitting on the toilet at the beginning... no offense. Some nicely struck poses and good timing... felt a little cliche with the acting, though... especially the last pose.

Jonathan Paquin:

Like the personnality you gave him. Some of the poses could have been stronger and more thought out but he's got character !

Spencer Jones:

F70ish, F106 & 140ish his eyes shut open at different times. F57ish when he gets off chair he moves forward in anticipation then back which is fine but then he seems to do its again before standing which looks bit odd. F129ish the hands arms are very unnatural. F145ish the shoulders and body move unnaturally. F206 could hold that pose for a frame or two maybe more & the legs snap straight. I can see where your were trying to get with him and with bit more work it would have been quite nice the hugging himself was almost there. just generally need to stop him moving so much to make him look like he has more control over his own body. hope this helps and doesn't p!ss you off.

Dave Blanchette:

Great start, but needs more passes.

Renn:

This animation would've worked well with a female character, but this one pulls it off just as well! Very well animated all over!

An extra star for excellent movement of the feet!