Pallav Sharma:

learn basics of body mechanics lead and follow srong pose first arcs cusion settel follow through etc etc

Macarena Santillan:

Key poses and actions are good, I really like her fiddling with the glasses. Movements are too fast and dont have time to settle.

Diane Aarts:

Try to limit poses to one key pose per phrase, it's tempting to do one for every word or accent but it's too busy that way. Try to move the whole torso as well, moving just the arms and head will look robotic