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Closer Than You Think

by Liam De Bolla

Final Rating: 5.73. Finished 22 out of 86 entries.

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Animator: Liam De Bolla

Description: Hello, I am an animation student currently in their second year of study, looking for people to critique my work. Thank you.

Experience: 2 years as a student.

Time taken: 3 weeks.

Comments:

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manikanth:

i like the idea

Steve Reach:

Good concept. His body bends strangely near the end. He bends back and forth like a rubber band. The lip sync isn't bad, but I would have brought her closer, maybe made the table smaller, we could barely see her when she delivers her lines.