Final Rating: 2.97. Finished 150 out of 185 entries.

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Animator: Juliana

Description: A college project.

Experience: One year and a half

Time taken: 4 days

Comments:

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Lucky Brown:

add more pose in ur dialogue, and dont leave tje guy in spec completely still when he is not talking to keep him alive.

Ruben Uggla:

The lip movement could be improved because it doesn't really match what the characters are saying. I also think that when the baker speaks the camera could be closer to his face since he is the focus and theres a lot of nothing in the background. The camera movement in the end is also a bit distracting.

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the camera movements are kind of shaky