Final Rating: 5.63. Finished 26 out of 185 entries.

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Animator: Fikri Aldi

Description: Canning Factory x( x( x(

Experience: i'm still student

Time taken: 2 week

Comments:

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Jason Weilee:

The wide camera angle makes it difficult to read the character's expressions

Suyog Patil:

Nicely Done ..

Richard Adams:

Awesome animation overall. Particularly how you can tell where the offscreen guy is just by how the onscreen one acts. One of the best entries this month. Top 5, maybe Number 1.

Shiladitto Gupto:

Good animation.. but if I'm not wrong you've missed some of the inhales and exhales, try to add them in future and also there's a small popp in the knee at the end..

Tiffany Chao:

Would like to see the second person behind the table, however the animation on the baker is very good, especially as he spins on one foot after the line "everyone is dying" and keeps looking over his shoulder to make eye contact

Ruben Uggla:

The animation is really good. All I'm missing is perhaps some camera changes so you get a better view of the character.