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The Turmoiled Baker

by Felipe Souza

Final Rating: 5.31. Finished 36 out of 185 entries.

417 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Felipe Souza

Description: A baker opens up about his depressing past.

Experience: Recently Graduated

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Wai Han Lau:

I like the big movements! Although, I feel like at moments the movements can be a bit too snappy... especially between frames 213 - 219. It feels like there needs to be more easing from his hands in front of him to his hands on his legs.

Andres Gomji:

Seems like the character is overacting. You should tone it down a little bit. But other than that, looking good :)

Pamela Rivera:

The expressions are extremely exaggerated, and the lip sync is not matching the audio. But I like the toony feeling i the way he moves his arms.

Preeth:

there should have been a second character. It would have improved this shot

Laurent Ch√Ętellier:

Too bad the lipsync is off, it could have work very well.