Final Rating: 5.97. Finished 18 out of 185 entries.

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Animator: Muhammad Risnadi

Description: interviewing how the baker's life

Experience: 2 Years

Time taken: 2 Weeks not full time

Comments:

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Jason Weilee:

Nice timing, just need to work on ease in/ease out. Also, the lip sync of the reporter at the beginning can be simplified more.

Jim deMello:

The mouth and facial motions are rather impressive to look at, giving the characters a nice amount of life. I would watch out for their other body parts, though, as they feel way too still and could move around more in order to add more to the characters' movements.

Poh hui:

good anim! just hope that if you could have a little bit interesting facial expression, it will be so great. Coz the timing, the animation style you have there is already so great, but it's just lacking a little of the characteristic from their face. Good job!

Suyog Patil:

Much Appreciated... Nicely Done !

Ruben Uggla:

Really well animated actually. I do feel that the bakers facial expressions from frame 190 to 210 don't fit that well but overall pretty good.

Craig Portnoy:

Some of the acting choices were nice. I feel though that the eyeline of the screen left character is a off. It seems a bit too high.

Ivan Mendoza:

I really like the animation style.

Wai Han Lau:

loving the minute details in this, such as the hand bounce at frame 64! Very good, keep it up!

Pamela Rivera:

I like the acting of the baker, and the animation curves of his head. Nice job!

Ruth Agada:

Great job.

David Ibarreta:

Overall the animation is good. My main suggestion is that the bald guy's hands should be more expressive and not always clenched in fists.

Satya:

Nice...