Final Rating: 4.35. Finished 82 out of 185 entries.

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Animator: Jonathan Grzybowski

Description: A baker and his friend

Experience: 5 years

Time taken: 30 days

Comments:

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Michaela Wadzinski:

Love personality on the older gentleman!

Wai Han Lau:

Really liking this concept! The criticisms I would make is that the old man's poses aren't very strong, he just seems to hobble and his strongest pose is at frame 287 where points at the can. The staging is a tad bit confusing, especially at frame 23 where both characters feel like they're moving in sync (both to the their left) which feels slightly unnatural and you can't really make out what the old man is picking up and holding.

Jacinta Joe:

It would of been nice to see more of the old man's face.

Tiffany Chao:

Grandpa's facial expression and appearance matches the dialogue very nicely! However the young man's movement forward and back during the line "why did you decide to be a baker" seemed unnatural

Ruth Agada:

It would be great to see some of the old man's expressions instead of having his head so down. I think making those expressions very visible will add to his great posses.

Shiladitto Gupto:

The idea is good.. there's a lot could be done with the old guy..

Fabia Fuchs:

I like the idea of the tired bent-over grandpa, but unfortunately you see mostly his forehead and not his eyes or facial expression which makes it really difficult to follow his words. Instead you see the other person who is not as important standing in a much more prominent space.