Final Rating: 2.63. Finished 168 out of 185 entries.

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Animator: Dierre Williams

Description: Two friends relaxing and one complaining about the day.

Experience: Some

Time taken: Three weeks

Comments:

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Ruben Uggla:

The movements feel too robotic at times and too floaty at others

Richard Adams:

Poor staging, large parts of body dead still, a lot of floatiness to movements (bad). Study up on staging and on "moving holds". That will help you a lot next time.

Lea:

Pretty sure his entire hand enters into the head geometry in the beginning there. Odd camera angles too. I'd suggest doing a storyboard next time and showing other people to see if your scene makes sense to them.

Pamela Rivera:

Needs work on the camera takes. Nice scenery