Final Rating: 4.15. Finished 94 out of 185 entries.

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Animator: Daniel Oliveira

Description: A guy talking about his ex job

Experience: 4 years

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Richard Adams:

A strange one. Difficult one to rate. Staging problem. Showing only hands and arms hurts this a lot. I understand you want to hide the can until the end as a punch line reveal--but wish you had at least shown the man's head and pulled the camera back more, leave the talking can offscreen until the reveal.

Maria Robertson:

Interesting idea but you repeat the same gestures over and over again and it gets boring

Ruben Uggla:

Funny idea. My only critique is that I don't think the hand motions fit what the characters are saying that well.

Jacinta Joe:

Some really nice hand shapes in there!

Shiladitto Gupto:

The concept is good but needs good execution..

Armando:

The camera shots before the reveal are the best. is a great idea that needs a lot of polish. This can be great. Probably can scrap the literal "can" for a chef. though i think well animated hands and dough would suffice.