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Looking for someone else

by Carlos

Final Rating: 2.52. Finished 155 out of 205 entries.

501 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Carlos

Description: First time uploading to 11sec, animation not finished please don't kill me

Experience: a few months

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Kazi Abu Bakkar Chisty:

awesome! hahaha....

Joshua Farmer:

using the same character with no differences make it difficult to follow. keep the hat on one or add something to make one stand out from the other.

Kendra Kaye Coffey:

ha ha ha! I really liked the motion he made with the chin on his student. it really gave him a creepy vibe even with the character design being a very general vanilla stock design. also the face of the student really sold the creepy vibe of the dancing master as well.

Timothy Muller:

Hi there. My advice for you is to strengthen your contact poses. Practice contrapposto and line of action. Also, many of your character actions are even paced, so play around with your timing.
Keep the good work up. Cheers!

Lewis van der Werf:

Very floaty still, as its still in blocking phase. Maybe keep it in stepped mode until you have defined some nice poses and timing?