Final Rating: 3.16. Finished 113 out of 205 entries.

492 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Hernan Dario Castro

Description: I had fun too creating this animation, I liked

Experience: I am student of animation in colombia, and I have not experience as animator.

Time taken: I made this animation about 30 hours

Comments:

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Joshua Farmer:

Feel like this animation was dodging the lip and face movement by picking a character without a mouth. Just feel it would be much more interesting with different characters and more face animation.

Timothy Muller:

Hi there. My biggest advice for you is to experiment with contact poses. Practice contrapposto and line of action more. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep on truckin'.

Emily:

The set up is nice, but the animations are lacking a bit. I thing you should have the kid move his feet so he's in a more relaxed position when he talks. The boy character is a good rig but if the character is in the scene when there is dialogue I feel like you should have used someone how could talk.