Final Rating: 3.73. Finished 83 out of 205 entries.

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Animator: Gabriel Vieira

Description: Let's dance.

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: one month

Comments:

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Erin Goddard:

I like the dummy! it feels quite realistic the way the head swings back etc. the Lip sync seems a little bit off but overall good job

Kendra Kaye Coffey:

the mannequin was extremely well done. I could visually identify it's weight and that it was just a mannequin through it's motion. Also I noticed you paid attention to the little details in the audio file and animated things to go along with it, like the bag laying down for example. Good attention to detail.

Bradley Adams:

A great use of the audio with the dropping of the bag! I feel that some of the lip sync could have been improved with bigger mouth movements. Other than that good animation overall, 8/11

Timothy Muller:

Hello there. I have a few recommendations to improve your work:
1. The student's reaction at the end confuses me. Is he reacting to seeing the mannequin's face? The reveal of the teacher's title as soon as it's presented?
2. Play more with line of action and contrapposto, even in subtitles such as facial expressions. Your characters are very stiff throughout the whole scene.
3. Small note, but the perspective in the final shot seems off. The table appears to be floating and even more confusing with its appearance behind the teacher.
Overall, I enjoyed watching this. Keep up the good work.