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Animator: Devin Stewart

Description: A boy meets his master...

Experience: 1 year

Time taken: 3 days

Comments:

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Timothy Muller:

Hi there. My advice for you is to strengthen your contact poses. Practice contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep the good work up.

Isaiah:

It would be nice if the dancing master's eyes emoted more, perhaps if he looked in the screen direction of the smaller character while he talked.
The master's poses seem a little lacking, very straight up and down. I liked your spin, some of your small brow and eyelid movement and your finger taps though. Good job :)