Final Rating: 2.72. Finished 141 out of 205 entries.

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Animator: Paul Von

Description: Sara finally decides to try out for the school football team. The reception was not what she expected...

Experience: almost 2 years

Time taken: 40-50 hrs plus some planning time

Comments:

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Danilo Passos:

Animation is all floating

Timothy Muller:

Hello there. My recommendation for you would be to practice your posing skills. Focus on contrapposto and line of action. Also check out Ed Hook's "Acting for Animators" if you haven't already.
Keep up the good work. Cheers!

James Trimm:

The arms in particular are very floaty... try to move them to pose to pose with little bounce/ follow through rather than completely stopping... (if that makes sense:D)?

Lucy Acland:

There's something there, but the characters are moving too slowly. They don't feel real.