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The crazy dancing master

by Nassim Briedj

Final Rating: 6.59. Finished 10 out of 205 entries.

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Animator: Nassim Briedj

Description: A dancing master like no other...

Experience: 1 year as professional

Time taken: 18 days

Comments:

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Timothy Muller:

Haha! You got me!
Lovely facial animation, especially from 188-210. Your lip sync throws me off sometimes, but there's decent form.
I wasn't a fan of the boy though. His expressions are quite simple and we only get one shot to truly see him.
Teacher sometimes has stiff animation. He has a sharp stop at "... be here a mid-day." Try adding slight fluidity with his hips to slow out.
Lastly, your timing sometimes is a frame late or early. Teacher's movement backwards at "...late," seems a drop too early, but that could simply be my preference.
Otherwise, great work. Please keep making more of that ending, I can't stop laughing!

Erin Goddard:

I like it! movements could be a bit smoother but overall it's a fun piece.

Kendra Kaye Coffey:

OK WE HAVE A WINNER! Thus far, this is my favorite. The facial movements, the lighting, the comedic timing, everything was on point. Also the use of the light and smoke effect at the end was tastefully done. Nothing was over done or under done.

James Trimm:

Nice!:D

Paul Wei:

Really nice! Love the flow between the shots and the camera setup. Funny reveal at the end :)

Joaquin Casas:

Butt jajaj