Final Rating: 2.30. Finished 166 out of 205 entries.

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Animator: Diego González

Description: A young mage and his new master in....something

Experience: 2-3 years

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Timothy Muller:

Hello there. My advice for you is to experiment with camera angles. The first shot is quite far, and the second far too close. Also try improving your contact poses. They establish everything in the shot and, in greatest form, able to tell the entire story by themselves (comics for example). Keep up the work.

Eric Raffle:

cant see anything

Lucy Acland:

We need more in betweens.