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The wrong tools for the Job

by David Boedigheimer

Final Rating: 2.72. Finished 145 out of 167 entries.

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Animator: David Boedigheimer

Description: Two archaeologist working on a small unknown object. The one with the clip board is the smart one, the one working just doesn't want to admit it.

Experience: First college course, and some in highschool

Time taken: 3 weeks

Comments:

(Commenting only available during the rating period)

Nathan Greensmith:

More key poses.

Hanne Dewachter:

Well, this needs some improvement. Your movements are very mechanical, don't forget bodies often make multiple movements at once, try to use that to accentuate the soundbite. Also, your lipsync made it sound like the guy kept saying "I am ripe" instead of "right" :D Mouths don't generally close on the "T"-sound.