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out played by the student

by Shawn Gilmer

Final Rating: 2.35. Finished 156 out of 167 entries.

385 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Shawn Gilmer

Description: This was the 4th animation I have ever made, and I had fun for the time frame I had to work on it, and I want to get better.

Experience: little

Time taken: 2 weeks

Comments:

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Eric Raffle:

you need better motion at one point the guy comes in way too fast and then the girl goes into slow motion, you need to learn better execution

Ezra Allen:

Did he come in on a skateboard?

Kerry Kirkpatrick:

Everything is rlly floaty. Try adding weight!