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Legendary Painting

by Gary

Final Rating: 4.44. Finished 77 out of 167 entries.

346 views including the voting period.

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Animator: Gary

Description: Malcolm is working on his own painting, and a girls comes in to look at his work, and then gives some critiques.

Experience: student

Time taken: 1.5 week

Comments:

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Nathan Greensmith:

Entertaining, good walk animation from frame 270.

Francisca Zamorano:

awesome final :D congrats

Sarah Johnson:

It's kind of weird to me that she's entering the scene as she says the first line because the dialogue sounds like there was conversation before it. Also, I'm not sure what she's doing with his shoulder towards the end? Good start though, this could be an interesting one to finish later.

Ren:

Everything has a floatyness to it.