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Emotionally Charged Argument

by Dennis Arell

Final Rating: 2.96. Finished 135 out of 167 entries.

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Animator: Dennis Arell

Description: I'm currently taking Animation Class under James Harrod for Introduction to Animation at Mt. Hood Community College.

Female and Male Normans where acquired from Ben Halstead via the Animated Buzz forums.

Experience: Two Months

Time taken: Aproximately 16 Hours over two weeks

Comments:

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Nathan Greensmith:

Ok poses. Needs work.

Ezra Allen:

funny last action on the girl....why is she tapping her finger tips together?
Too many unnatural poses, use less poses. It needs to be much more subtle and relate more to the voice acting.

Sarah Johnson:

Remember to be conservative when making camera moves. They get jarring pretty quickly. I would also try to give this scene some more context to what's going on.