Jesse J. Jones:

Last hand movement seems odd and over-acty. Try sticking with one pose and holding it for more emotional impact. Great work though! :)

Aaron Rivera:

Very nicely done! Everything moves and works properly and the acting is good, though I question the decision of him ending on another point. It seems a little odd to go from a point, to a flare, and back to a point. I think a fist or finger pinch could've been more natural. Nice job either way.

Menga Nkouka:

a close up on the man at the beginning of the music could have more impact. Great environment..