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The Secret Affair She Had

by J-p D'Almeida

Final Rating: 3.51. Finished 143 out of 197 entries.

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Animator: J-p D'Almeida

Description: The wife of a married man is confronted by her rival work colleague with a particular photograph that captured her with another man in a rather intimate scenario.

Experience: I'm a collage student studying animation for 2 years on Maya 2014

Time taken: nearly 1 week

Comments:

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David Maguire:

Poses are really strong, but some more breakdowns/spline work is definitely needed. Timing is hard to determine because of the early stage, but some actions seem oddly spaced. Great early stages though!

Jesse J. Jones:

Lacks fundamentals, just pops from pose to pose. Work on anticipation, follow through, arcs...