Comments:
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Danny Kneip:
Hard to tell if you're panning the camera with the characters movement - but he's taking a step (about 130 or so) and seemingly going nowhere. There are some nice acting choices here, but overall, I don't think his mood is the best match for the audio. The composition, all the head room, is also an interesting choice. I would be curious to know what your reasoning is for that.
Rob Small:
I like the finger point on "One way or the other"! That emphasised it quite nicely!
Valentious Williams:
fair
Mattie Walsh:
You really catch the lean forward before a walk, he leans a little too forward after the second step.
Gary:
The lip sync looks like it fires too early in the latter half. I like the reaction to hearing the initial line.
Animator: Karim Fradin
Description: Here is my first participation to the 11SecondClub Competition ! It was really great , an interesting experience and i hope you will enjoy my work as i enjoyed working on it !
Experience: 2 years
Time taken: 15 hours