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Animator: Ciril Bohak

Description: This is my first submission here.
I started with animation just few months back and this is my second finished animation so far.
It was created as part of my student project.

Experience: none

Time taken: around 40 hours

Comments:

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Andrew:

doesn't seem like much thought was put into interpretation. just three talking heads. lip sync seems a bit off as well. get the hands in there too and body movement

Nate Lane:

haha wow that was loud. I think I broke my speakers. Hehe, anyways, upon second watch, after adjusting the sound, hehe, I noticed that you have a very nice start. I think that the lip syncing is a bit off tho. It seems that all of your characters are talking very loud and angrily (yes they were loud, hehe, wink wink), which I don't think the dialog says that they are. So maybe just cut down the exaggeration and you'll be golden. Keep it up man!

Noah Arntson:

Raise the roof for stop motion!

Willem-Jan L. van Rootselaar:

tell a story. it's not only lypsync. You have a whole body that can tell a story

Andy Menter:

great start!

NeilB:

Limiting the focus to heads only, one at a time, is a good plan. These appear to show the initial blocking pass, the few starting key poses and expressions. Many more steps of building motion and expression keys are needed before rendering with image-based lighting and blur.

Vanessa Blair:

I would have liked to see more of the body to see more movement. The lip sync is pretty good though

Eric Huelin:

Lip-sync popping problems, an establishing shot would have helped.

Alex:

Nicely rendered, but the animation is still a bit rough, especially the last kids head movement.

Jarryd:

The expressions need to be stronger and the animation needs smoothing, the mouth seems to pop a lot as the characters speak, nice render though.

Mayank:

nice..you should show body movement also

Mike Courtney:

looks like a first or second pass, keep working on it

Ben Hatton:

Rendering effect are nice. The camera pan between first two speakers doesn't work, and we don't understand the spatial relationships between these characters.

Sean Graham:

Because of how close up the characters are, the facial needs to be a lot more refined.

Ashwani:

good efforts

James Fearn-Wannan:

Mrmrm I don't think there's enough movement going on here. The eyes seem a bit slow and static and the mouths maybe open a bit too far.

David Shum:

Renders looks good!
But the lipsync kinda caught my eye before I could enjoy your nice renders :(

Lindsay Thompson:

This one is half too floaty and half too snappy.... floaty heads, stepped key mouths... Was this intentional? I guess tighten up the heads, loosen up the mouths.

Ken Rice:

Good effort - have a go at animating the bodies next time... get some more expression in there.

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