Marco Palmieri:

no need for so much silence at begining. not bad though.

Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

i think the beginning before the dialog is the most successful...the lip sync could some work...

Joan Delmont:

Clean anim, but i don't like the intentions...it's boring.

Caryn:

Poses for characters on the left at end are so similar. More variety would help.

JAEHYUN PARK:

Nice animation but lipsync is little bit off. good job!!

Ken Rice:

nice stuff - would like to have seen the middle character have more interesting poses in the second half - first half had more variety

Santiago Montenegro:

good man!... good acting good posing nice moving holds. good idea too.

Nate Lane:

Really good man. I love the subtle nature you've got with it. Tons of tiny little things here and there. Awesome!

Noah Arntson:

You kept me interested and established a real predicament at the beginning. Your choice of casting the man character for the kid threw me off. His background movements was great though without being distracting.

Willem-Jan L. van Rootselaar:

the animation of the left fellow is nice

Paul Naas:

Voice is a tad too young coming out of that character. The animation is terrific.

Eric Huelin:

Hits: Good layout, good body language from the middle guy.
Misses: Why is he spelling isn't clear, took more than one viewing to notice that the guy in the BG was talking since no one is paying attention at him.

Andy Menter:

kid in the back kickin at the bodies is great! other parts of it just seem dull. I mean...the acting's nice n all, just seems dull.

Ramesh Koruturu:

concept is nice that right first character 2nd pose is no balance

chakravarma:

Awesome

Mayank:

nice work..i like the little boy's action..main front character hands r bit closer to the body..tyr to break the symmetric. cool

Mike Courtney:

kid's lip sync looks a bit off

Guneet:

The animation is nice., even the expressions.. though the step he takes towards the "bodys" in the beginning is unecessary. But overall i like it.. the setting and the visuals are nice too.

Ryan Brooks:

Too much going on before the actual soundbyte. I'd say shorten it a bit.

Andy Bewernick:

Love the kicking of the bodies and stuff. Very good.

Maya K:

This one starts of so nice and subtle, but the tone seems to be contradictory to the audio. The audio has a comedic nature, and the pacing of the introduction of this shot gives it maybe too serious of a tone.

Mark DeRidder:

This one goes to 11! Great job Mike!

Ben Hatton:

These guys seem not to have a purpose. The slow start didn't really work for me. I really like the expression of the guy on the left when he says "bodies".

Ryan Chan:

Good job! I think your poses are a little too stiff and could have a little more "life" in them but i like the set up and animation leading up to the dialog.

Ryan Lowe:

I feel it's way to much time that you used to set up.

Ben Harper:

Nice acting overall!

James Fearn-Wannan:

This was good. The actions were well thought out and charmingly executed.

Ashwani:

really godd

jonas bech:

can really liked the way the boy kicking the bodies

Michael Krieter:

very Nice!!

Juan Carlos Valdez:

you need to work on your posing and body language on the characters in the foreground

David Shum:

179, the kid is waaay off balance...
I like how the kid is playing with the bodys tho!

Emmanuel:

When the person in the red turns, it feels like he's stiff. Maybe take out some frames in the beginning. He takes too long to say his speech.

Andy Simpson:

good acting and lighting.. like originality