Cows - Bodys
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Marco Palmieri:
lip sync is not clear and snappy enough. the run of the cow lacks weight.
Nicholas Palmer Kelly:
i think you need to direct the attention a bit more because i was lost in the beginning...i was looking SR for some reason...the lip sync 's hard to read too because of the rig..and the little gallop at the end from the kid needs more attention with mechanics..
Emmanuel:
It'd be nice if they were a bit more expressive.
Ryan Chan:
Love the use of different-than-human characters and the story being told. The body animation is looking a little floaty though and could be worked on a little more. Keep it up though!
Noah Arntson:
We all love the reference to the skull here. It was a challenge to reference the "bodies" but yours seems to make sense. The little veal galloping seemed to puppet like--his back legs seemed to not support his trot. It was like he was galloping in a couple hops, where he should've trotted?! Great char's and now that I examine your background, that seems too awesome!
Caryn:
The run doesn't quite work for me. I'm not really feeling the weight.
Ken Rice:
Pretty good animation. I think the positioning of your characters could be better though: the calf kind of interferes with the right cowâs silhouette and the calf runs directly towards the camera (just feels a bit too square on to me).
Nate Lane:
Awesome man. I really love your originality. It's very refreshing. The only thing that you could maybe tweak is the way the younger cow gallops over. I have no idea how cows run, but to me it looks a bit floaty, and seems that you have all four legs off of the ground for a tad too long to sell as a small gallop. I don't know. Really awesome tho man!
Jason Smith:
Does the brown cow make chocolate milk? Interesting idea with cow and all. Very nice overall, the timing on the gallop over was too slow.....
Eric Huelin:
Hits: It's cute!
Misses: The cows lack acting range.
Ramesh Koruturu:
concept is nice but that small character running is not good
Sumit:
flow of life is missing. You really need to study quad leg animals like horse.
Keep working hard. Nice idea.
chakravarma:
wow!great idea.
Mayank:
fuuny..nice work
Mike Courtney:
the calf's frolic needs work
Amanda Gil:
Funny!
Andy Bewernick:
Good! I guess you did add some motion to the characters! Turned out great!
Ben Hatton:
The characters don't seem to be attached to their situation, they're just reading the lines.
yoozco:
animation isn't the strongest point here, but i like the overall look and of corse an idea.
Ashwani:
good work
James Fearn-Wannan:
I think this is pretty good. They might be just a tad too stretchy for cows, though. The weight doesn't feel quite right.
Janarthanan:
good idea..but animation need improvment..the calf running seems soo odd..
yhe brown guy..y is he noding his body like tht..no need for such moving holds..keep him in a good pose and make some minor axns,..tht wil look live..unless ur animations are complete..dont go for render..it under estimates ur skill as animator...
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Santiago Montenegro:
good idea man
Erik Westlund:
Lip-sync is lost inside of the character forms. Second character's lines is made unclear with hopping juvenile characters.
Ben Harper:
I love the models! however, i would say you need to push the expressions to add more life the animation.
Lianna Scrimger:
the one part that stuck out was the little cow's run....very robotic and weightless. I like everything else though, nice idea!
Andy Simpson:
very original, smooth animation and timing










Animator: Dave Ward
Description: Cows discussing the "bodies" in the desert.
Experience: 7 years
Time taken: 30 hours