Job vd Heuvell:

The timing is a little too fast sometimes.
At frame 31 it looks like the left character is being kicked forwards.
and at frame 248 the left character stops too abruptly. Maybe put in a moving hold there.
I like the animation in the middle!

Ken Rice:

Nice setup - your left character is a little juddery in places though and I think the lip sync is a bit out.

JAEHYUN PARK:

Cool.

Nate Lane:

awesome idea man. I really love it.

Eric Huelin:

Only little thing... when he rests his arms on his knees his arms seem a little floaty.

Janarthanan:

has lot of symetrical timings..cud have given delays in hand ..heads..paper penetrates..in his body,..even though u have mad snappy actions..cud have given some settles and cusions at required place...

Sergey B.:

funny

chakravarma:

looking nice.

Mayank:

good try..but its bit floaty and jurkey..needs lot of work

Mike Courtney:

the movement of the paper is very linear

Ryan Brooks:

Great setup, but too many keys on the walking/movement. Doesn't look natural.

Carlos Fins:

Animation needs work. Good idea, though.. I really like how you brought the kid in at the end in a random fashion.

Ben Hatton:

Great interpretation, and nice gag with the eyeholes in the paper. Animation is all marionette-legs, the characters don't have enough weight. The 'take' at the end felt a bit extreme, and could have been better acted.

Ashwani:

good effort

James Fearn-Wannan:

The poses feel a bit too static to me.

David Shum:

good idea :P

Garrett Woodley:

The animation has a way to go. I really like how you set it up though. Good framing.

Santiago Montenegro:

the right arm haves a streching error