Marco Palmieri:

poses could be clearer and more of them. Characters need more emotions.

Andrew:

not enough lower body movement on either character. the middle character barely moves for the entire shot

Erik Westlund:

Weight for standing characters is too evenly placed on both feet. Guns in hand lack weight. Needs reversals in line of action to emphasis phrasing in dialog.

Cuby:

That was really good. The idea was excellent and definately the best I've seen so far!

Possibly the two main guys were a tad stiff but overall it was great.

Keep it up

Noah Arntson:

Keep them moving subtle even when they aren't speaking so they stay alive.

Nate Lane:

awesome man. It's looking great! One thing that I think you could do to really add to your piece is to do a little more with the lower body. Because right now you have really not much lower body movement, or shifts of wight, which can really help. Just a though :). Keep it up tho man! You've done really well :)

Jason Smith:

Very funny!! Watch the lip sync, and try some more entertaining poses, I know the dialog wasn't super exciting, but making some more poses would help spicing it up.

Eric Huelin:

Hits: Good composition, well acted except for the...
Misses: Spelling bot over acts the double take

Janarthanan:

the robos need lot of work done..
the first guy..after completing his part..stands static..could have made a good pose..with good balance...the head reaction also doesn seem to go well..

chakravarma:

nice effort

ROMI S PAL:

need to work on posses

Mayank:

cool animation i like the concept

Ashwani:

good work man

Shannon:

Need to use some living holds rather than just full holds, and could use some more in-betweens to help smooth out the action.

Mike Courtney:

the gray is static for most of the animation

Ryan Brooks:

The person on the left freezes completely for a long period of time. Can definitely see where the key ends. Glitch as well before right guy moves. Great setup though, just needs the keys tightened up and some arcing on the movements.

Andy Bewernick:

The strongest animation came from the "dead" character.

Amdbcg:

little bit stiff

Ben Hatton:

Feels like guy2 stood and waited and then just said his lines without thinking about what guy1 had said.

Simon Bean:

Nice idea overall, just lacks polish. Nice try with the 'double-take' but think you could put more thought into it's timing and the effect throughout the body

deepak:

the stage looks nice. but i believe m seeing very less movements in the animation and also looks lit bit jerky to me. keep working

Ben Harper:

Not too bad but the main characters could do with a lot more expression when they talk. It just seems a bit too stiff for me.

James Fearn-Wannan:

I like what's going on here though it feels a bit stiff having the characters remain perfectly still like that.

Santiago Montenegro:

jeje they look llike terminators!!