Dave Poler:

Timing seems a bit slow at times.

sharad kumar:

good...but i think its a lil bit floaty around the frames 168..like when he is bringing the hand down...kee up the good work.

Nate Lane:

cool man. I think it's looking great. One thing that I think that you could maybe tweak the the way the guy hopes in the beginning when he can't close the trunk. I think that the dialog doesn't really show this sort of change in action, but stays rather consistent, meaning that his acting will probably be rather consistent. Just a thought. Keep it up!

Noah Arntson:

The trunk part was creative. The kid's color choices of fluorescent green did not match the overall scene. The one character's lip sync seemed to be off sync.

A.J. Black:

Nice work, just one thing though. It would have been nice to see the guy at the trunk try to do his job and direct his speech to the guy at the hood, and vice versa. Good work on the mouth movement, but needs more facial expressions. Hope that helps and good luck!

Eric Huelin:

Hits: Attractive set

Misses: Needs work on the dizzying establishing shot then zoom then sudden scene change, the Lip-sync is off.

Jason Smith:

Poses were too floaty, try animating pose to pose and block your scene out first, then go straight ahead once you get your timing down. Nice job overall.

Vanessa Blair:

Lip sync is a little off

Janarthanan:

Good work..Needs to be workd on lip sync..

Chelsea Hiatt Farley:

Nice start, but it's still really stilted, and I'm confused as to why the guy is jumping off the ground when he first closes the trunk.

Ken Rice:

nice setup you've got there, but your animation is very floaty and the lip sync needs a lot of work.

Sumit:

Good idea but need lot of work in animation.

Mayank:

cool..but u need some improvements

ROMI S PAL:

timing is missing

Ashwani:

good

Mike Courtney:

the only body that moves is the one by the trunk, work on the static characters

Peter Satera:

Haha, excellent scenario. The animation could be a little more lifelike and faster. But i like your idea!

Ben Hatton:

Characters don't have enough weight.

James Fearn-Wannan:

I quite like the presentation, though the movements seem a bit broad and slow to me.

Erik Westlund:

Interesting NY Noir aesthetic. Camera move in is unnecessary. Movements are slow and floaty in many places, popping in others. Appearance of boy is a good way to address the "shock value" of his dialog.