chickens

Final Rating: 3.63. Finished: 48 out of 72 entries.
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Animator: Adir Slutzki

Description: chickens having eggs for dinner...

Experience: still studying...

Time taken: a day to animate and 3-4 days to color

Comments:

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Amy:

The quick head movements can work as behavioral for chickens, but choose your moments carefully. Right now, they seem a little to random.

Job vd Heuvell:

Too much movement from frame 1 to 55. But overall, nice work!

Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

it's cool to see 2D and it's a real good effort....and i know 2D is a whole other ballgame, but there's not a lot of expression in their faces so maybe push your key poses more....it's been a while since i've attempted 2D...i commend you.

Emmanuel:

The lip sync need work.

Mark Persson:

Love it! Nice to see some more 2D!

Keep up with the good work!D

Paul Naas:

Nice work. A little tighter lip synch would take it to the next level.

Nate Lane:

cool man. I think you handled it very well. I think I commented on your WIP, but I'll just refresh the idea... I think that the first chicken is kinda ll over the place. try to hold some of those poses. It would really help a lot. Keep it up though man. Keeping a consistent drawing isn't easy, and you seem to have handled it very well. Nice job:)

Eric Huelin:

The lip-sync is off, spelling rooster bobs around too extremely.

Jason Smith:

Movement had a little too much exaggeration on it. Love the 2D action!

Vanessa Blair:

The characters are a bit too static when they're not talking. And more inbetweens are needed, animation is a tad jerky.

venkatesh:

some fine

Mayank:

Great effort

Amanda Gil:

i love it!!

Andy Bewernick:

The chicken scratching his butt was took to much attention away fromt the scene. I might have delayed it until right before or during his talking. Always nice to see 2D though.

Ben Hatton:

Who knew that chickens got itchybum...
Are they talking about the eggs? It's not clear.

Sean Graham:

All 2D gets extra points from me. Awesome effort!

Ashwani:

good

James Fearn-Wannan:

It's good but a bit simple.

jonas bech:

they moves to farst