Mark Bogdanoff:

Like the idea.

Ashwani:

very funny

sharad kumar:

good work...but u can show more weight when the gun falls!

Noah Arntson:

You have both guys jumping from shock at the same time--think about how powerful or dynamic it would be if one reacted differently or delayed his surprise. Great dead aliens though.

Andrew:

timing of the jumps seem off

A.J. Black:

Truthfully the first time I watched this I didn't even know where the kids voice is coming from. I know you directed the action to the little kick of the bodies, but that direction may be a stretch to far from the talking head. I like the concept, just needed to clear things up a little bit. Hope that helps and good luck!

Nate Lane:

cool man. It's looking great! One thing that I think you could maybe tweak is the holds on the poses. It's just looking a tad floaty, so maybe if you allowed for hte characters to hold their poses a bit longer it would really adda lot. Just a though :). It's looking really good. I really like how you have the gun fly up and then hit the guy on the head to knock him out. haha, very funny stuff. Keep it up!

Jason Smith:

Nice idea here! I think overall the poses were too floaty. I like the weight shift on the black dude.

Andy Menter:

it's not bad until the end there when the dead alien guy pops up and they just lose any flow they had earlier in the scene.

Eric Huelin:

Confusing... Oh I see took many viewings to figure out what fell, the guy on the left should have kept his eyes on the green guys for a better effect.

Janarthanan:

Good work..
but looks floaty..
Camera cuts are not gud..

Chelsea Hiatt Farley:

It took me a few times through to realize where the 3rd voice was coming from. It would have been more obvious if you had the guy on the right looking down at the alien first, then looking up at the last minute for the gun falling.

Mike Courtney:

from 219 to 248, the red guy not holding the gun is frozen

Guneet:

The gun toss was a good idea.. you should have executed it better. the reactions of the first guy (near the wall) are quite dumb.

Amdbcg:

the gun on that last part didn't fit with physics

James Fearn-Wannan:

I think this was good .. though, perhaps, more mass and intent needs to go into the character movements. Their hands don't look like they know where they're going..

Christopher Salamat:

a bit floaty still

Erik Westlund:

I don't think he would let go of that shot gut so easily.