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Animator: Justin Burks

Description: Ninjas can't spell.

Experience: 2 years of experience

Time taken: Took me 30+ hours

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Job vd Heuvell:

good animation! perhaps let the left character look back into the eyes of the right one at frame 153.
and the pose at frame 192 looks a little out of place. But overall, good job.

Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

ninjas are always cool....especially when they tag children along....maybe work on some of your poses a bit....

Freakbaba:

the other 2 char can be injected with more life. first char after he finished speaking, it wud be better if he looks back at the other 2 char instead of gazing upwards. camera cut hook up not working. bodies are kept in the wrong side which is confusing the overall scene. good attemp tho.

JAEHYUN PARK:

Great!!! I think lipsync is little bit off...specially for the second guy. Pretty good animation for general.

Noah Arntson:

Beside his pupil being off, his stare up into the nothingness made me wonder what he was thinking. I liked his recoil back as the other guy questions him.

Nate Lane:

awesome man its looking great! One thing that I noticed is the eyes on Moom. They can defenitely be tricky little things, as they are kinda inside his head and can't be seen from all angles when you should be able to see them (of course im talking about the very first shot of the guy screen left). Just tweak the eyes a bit so that the audience can see both of them. Really awesome work tho man. Well done :D

Eric Huelin:

The left guy is missing an eye? Why is he looking up in the air? Why is nobody moving when no one is talking?

Mayank:

left character is more close to camera....nice

Mike Courtney:

after the first guy says his line, he becomes a statue

Shannon:

The first speaker has some great moments, especially while he's spelling. Watch out for the elbows on the second speaker--you'll need to tuck in those pole vectors.

Andy Bewernick:

Really good, although the chest pumping in and out when they talk seems like they are gasping for breath everytime they speak. The floppyness of the first character is awesome though.

Janarthanan:

the hand looks static..ie., the kid catchin the adults hand..lot of symetry in axns...

Juan Carlos Valdez:

the second character body language didn't work for me. also his lip symc didn't quite fit

andrew s:

Nice, love the ninja outfits

venkatesh:

ok
you have to impro animation.
same animation repeting in this clip thats no good un looking

Taber Dunipace:

LOL googly eyes.

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