Marco Palmieri:

could show a bit more emotion in the second guy. some nice animation in there.

Aparna Varma:

i think u need to check the overall timing.the actions r playin out a lil after the dialogue...
but i like the first guys reaction towards the end.. keep workin!

Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

thx for all your crits guys :)

Mayank:

nice effort..try to reduce eye blink..

chloé:

Are you english ?

sharad kumar:

good work...u jus need to work more on the lips!!

Guneet:

Nice work. Very convincing even though there's only one camera angle... Myabe the driver's eye movements need some attention

dheer chaudhary:

Nice stuff

Ken Rice:

some nice bits in there but I can't help thinking your animation would be better if your camera was a bit higher (see the kid better)

Nate Lane:

Really awesome man. I'm loving the whole scenario. The poses of the guy screen right are really awesome. I also really love the expression of the guy screen left at the end. that's brilliant man. One thing that you could maybe add is thought process of the guy whos driving. I think that its very important to show that he's thinking, "what is he talking about", and show it on his face before he even says his dialog. Anyways, really awesome man!

Jason Smith:

Seemed a little floaty to me overall. Very nice facial expression and I love the kid pushing up his glasses, what a great touch that was.

Janarthanan:

Good work...cud hav shkd the car a bit..to give a driving feel..
the driver character..his eye brows hae much movnt..culd hav reduced it a bit...almost all chars have suffer frm same eye brow phobia!!

Gill Frank:

nice, but your lipsync could be worked on, its out of sync.

Gregory Naud:

Blinks feel too soft and too slow. Kid's gesture at the end when he puts back his glasses really adds a lot, good job;)

chakravarma:

really good.

Jarryd:

The blinking is a tad slow, but the expressions are well done

Ashwani:

good

Shannon:

The animation on the kid is really nice. I think the two guys in front could be a little more specific and quicker.

Mike Courtney:

nice work

Andy Bewernick:

It feels like it's in slow motion.

Ben Hatton:

Great reaction at the end.

David Shum:

I love the silent chuckle from the screen-left-guy! F240s

The shot feels a little bit busy IMO. It might be cause of those huge eyes, that everytime someone blinks, it draws so much attention....

venkatesh:

some times fine

Harry G:

looks nice... but still alot of things could have been imporved. It would have been nice to see the cr move as well. The eye blinks were a bit too slow and the lip sync's off