Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

more emphasis on your key poses and work on lip sync

Mark Persson:

Car crash i suppose.... great idea! But the anim needs more work totally!

Emmanuel:

The lip sync is okay. I think you can remove that tire rolling down.

Ken Rice:

Pretty good animation - however check your curve editor: animation appears floaty at times

Nate Lane:

Cool man. It's looking great. I think that you could maybe tweak the lip syncing tho. Realy try to show those bigger accents, and exaggerate them. Keep it up tho man, it's looking really cool.

Vanessa Blair:

It looks like the kid is looking above the first guy's head, not at him.

Janarthanan:

Great camera angels..i likd it a lot..but animation needs improvmnt..
first break the symetry if all chars..
control the floatiness..
Improv poses..
Think for a better idea..
also acting needs to be improved...

Jarryd:

Some of the eye movements were too jerky, except when voice one rolls his eyes.
Then your third voice has really good eye movement. So that's something you could tweak

Mayank:

nice effort..there is a bit jurk in the right character..

Ashwani:

good wok

Mike Courtney:

nice start, try exaggerating the facial expressions a bit more, especially on the child and pink shirt

Shannon:

A lot of drift happening here. Try clarifying your poses and tightening up your timing.

Pam:

Especially like th eye moments.

Ben Hatton:

I like the hand gestures on "b-o-d-y-s".

Sean Graham:

There's good performance potential here, it just needs a lot of refining, tightening up the facial some more, improvements in timing and cleaning up some of the gestures.

deepak:

eyes looks stepped or u left it that way? the hands are a bit floaty, i think u should go with halt sometimes. keep working

Jason Smith:

Movement's too floaty, overall very nice work!

James Fearn-Wannan:

I think this is pretty good overall though it gets a bit choppy at times.

jonas bech:

the kids lip sync is not the bedst

Juan Carlos Valdez:

the lip sunc is a little off. more expression is needed for the lip sync and body poses

Juan Calderon:

good establishing shot
as with all your animation, some of the advice I would give is always develop you characters give them a back ground and develop their characteristic that should be model sheet you also might want to create a simple model sheet about his posture and his actions of movement. once you have established that you can be gin to create thumbnails and develop a story behind the lip sync and try to keep you character in line with what you want to project as you develop the thumb nails always keep in mind on creating Key poses and extreme poses that you can later on use for developing bigger sketches. then these sketches can be used to pose your character on the computer and that will help you start blocking your character. it's a lot of work but it helps to plan you scene and performance on paper before you go on to the computer

Santiago Arellano:

It starts looking nice, could be a little more polished. Both the kid and the bald guy are reacting very blankly at the accident.

On a staging note, the tire covered the actual crash for the mayority of that shot, so it would have been a bit clearer if both the tire and car have their own space.