Mayank:

nice try..need to work on poses..line of action

dheer chaudhary:

good concept but i think u need to work on poses and timeing.

Eric Huelin:

Hits: Good body language, imaginative concept
Misses: Strange camera angle, the money guy is counting money like he's playing cards, spelling guy's left arm could raise sooner and slower, over blinking is distracting

Nate Lane:

Awesome man. I like it! I think that you could maybe do a bit more with the lower body for both of these guys. It just seems a bit static without them moving their entire bodys around. Now I'm not saying it has to be spastic, just some small movements that will really help sell the life of your characters. Keep it up!

Ashwani:

good

Mike Courtney:

nice work, might work on the dead guy's performance

Brad Regier:

Nice facial pose at "S."

Ben Hatton:

Nice acting. I really like how guy2's counting is interrupted.

Sean Graham:

Ok, I think this one's pretty well rounded. The entertainment value, though, is not really there, from a composition and acting choices perspective.

James Fearn-Wannan:

Great acting!

Janarthanan:

looks better...but some places need good sttles..weight shifts..etc..also cld have made a better pose