John T. Coomey:

haha I love the little punch at the end as the kid walks past.. Nice idea man..

Your posses feel very pose to pose. Try overlap actions a bit without making them floaty. Also when you move the character especially in the first guy, the different parts feel disconnected.

Guneet:

its funny for sure. but the animation needs some work..

Ryan Chan:

I really like the animation of the guy when he spells "b-o-d-y-s" and the kid walking by is great.

Nate Lane:

Cool man. I think I saw one just like this. Anyways, I think that you could work a bit on the lip syncing. For instance, on frame 189 and around that area the guys mouth is rather wide open, which I don't think is necessary. One quick way of fixing this is to just say the dialog yourself, and observe how your mouth moves. Keep it up!

Eric Huelin:

Hits: Good delivery of the gag, attractive set.
Misses: Safe cracker guy over gestures his lip-sync. There might be bodies scattered around the place but it would work better if there were at least two on scene.

Mayank:

nice try..cool

ROMI S PAL:

the knee of the second voice is raised while he is saying his dialouge, otherwise good

Ashwani:

good job

Mike Courtney:

lip-sync needs work

Shannon:

This is looking nice. You could use some ease-ins and ease-outs for your poses, especially on the first speaker. Watch out for over-posing.

Andy Bewernick:

Excellent,

Ben Hatton:

Has some charm.

Jason Smith:

Character 1's legs are popping... it was kind of distracting....
Great job overall.

James Fearn-Wannan:

I think this is basically good, though I think you need to be a bit careful about stringing your poses together. It feels a bit pose-to-pose-to-pose-to-pose..

Christopher Salamat:

nice concept. need to be cleaned up a little more

Janarthanan:

good idea...cld have mad it evn better

Ben Harper:

Not too bad overall. The animation is nice and fluid but the lip movements are a bit off. It doesn't feel as if they are speaking the right words.

Andy Simpson:

lip sync could be better

Taber Dunipace:

Ok... what's up with the bare midriff? One extra star for the fabulous robber man!