kemal kemal:

I like the poses and facial expressions, i think the lip sync could use some more work.

Marco Palmieri:

too much going on with the other characters. need to tone them down so they dont distract.

Nicholas Palmer Kelly:

the lip sync is off and fast...also your poses on SR 167-220 are bit much and forced...maybe try something else...same thing with SL at beginning....

Nate Lane:

haha awesome man. I really love the interaction between the green shirt guy and the kid. Awesome.

A couple things that I think you could maybe work on tho, are the lip syncing of the big guy, and the communication of what just happened (hit somebody (if that was your intention)). So to easily fix the second problem you could maybe just have a couple of frames of them cruising along, and have the car all of a sudden tilt forward a bit, showing that the car is stopped because they hit somebody, and maybe the guy whos driving could have a reaction as well as he tries to apply the break. Then you could go to what you have. So just that and a bit of tweaking with the lip syncing would really help I to sell it. Just my 200/10000 of a dollar :)

Anyways, this is really awesome work! Very nice job indeed.

Noah Arntson:

Seems like they hit their poses to quick and sharp. If you ease in and out of them this would be stellar.

Janarthanan:

Gud work..

Ramesh Koruturu:

that 2nd character animation is looking like a blocking stage and check that eye lookets

Mayank:

cool..i like the small character

Mike Courtney:

the offset of the reaction is nice, but both come too late

Andy Bewernick:

Liked it, the guy on the left seems a little to snappy with his lip movement. The over all fluid motion of the characters is very good though.

Claudia:

I really like how your characters are doing something through the animation.

Ryan Chan:

I'm guessing they just hit someone/people, and if that's that case, i'd like to see some indication of them hitting something, rather than just a still car.

Sean Graham:

I like the work doe to bring the acting to a place beyond the dialog. Something about the composition is bothering me though. Also, the animation could be more refined. But overall, I like where this one's going.

James Fearn-Wannan:

I like the ideas here. I think it might just be a little too pose-to-pose for me, though .. it feels like there's a lot of stopping and starting and it distracts me from the dialogue a bit.

Stefano:

If they've run over some people the overall attitude feel definitely too relaxed

Juan Carlos Valdez:

In my opinion, you need to work on your ins and outs. Use more slow in and slow out. The animation looks to spasy. Also the lip sync is too loose on the big guy.

Ben Harper:

Theres some nice bits in this. I don't think you need the guy in the green top to fall back at the start. It seems unnessicary. The interaction with the kid is nice but i think it needs to be smoothed out a bit more. Try using some slow in and slow out in your movements. It would give a more natural feel to the animation.